Efficacy of Drinking Water
Water has been known as very important element for our body to become healthy in several reasons. First of all, water has excellent detoxifying qualities. When water goes through our body, it excretes harmful oxygen and waste matter from the body. This is also related to the skin so when you drink a lot of water, you can have smooth skin due to the detoxifying effect. Secondly, drinking a lot of water helps in diet. Drinking water makes you feel satiety and satisfied so that you get to eat less than you expected. Also, water helps metabolism and this burns up calories which eventually helps to loose weight. Lastly, water assists in deep sleep. According to Korea Medical Foundation, body uses water during the sleep so when your body is lack of water, the blood density goes high which interrupts the sleep. By that, they recommend to drink 1/2 cup of water before going to bed to get a deep sleep. In short, the formula of 'water = health' is now a common sense.
Dear Youngeun,
답글삭제The importance of water cannot be stressed enough, for it is an essential component of a human’s vitality. Since there is clear advantages of water, I could quickly grasp what you say in your paragraph. Moreover, it is more reliable to quote Korea Medical Foundation’s view. By the way, I think you slightly missed a point to be a gorgeous paragraph. If you maximize the chance of using images, your work will be more persuasive and informative. I am looking forward to seeing your excellent writing soon.
Thanks,
Yeonwoo
Hi Youngeun~~ I think water is very important thing for our body too. I heard it is good to drink at least 500ml water everyday.
답글삭제Your writing is good.
Bye~~~