2015년 9월 26일 토요일

The Most Ideal Place For Me to Concentrate

        The most ideal place for me to concentrate well has to be widely open, not too quiet, and well fit in temperature. First of all, when you enter the room, it has to be wide-open which has big window on one side of the wall so that sun can stream into the room. The table on the other side of the wall has to be big enough so that I can study comfortably with a lot of books. Also, the room should have a bit of noise. The noise doesn't mean loud voices or something that bothers your ear. I'm meaning the sounds of jazz music and whispering voices. I can't concentrate well if it's too quiet so this helps me to get focused. Lastly, the temperature of the room has to be suitable. If the room is too warm, I fall asleep easily and if the room is too cold, I only concern about the fact that I'm cold. The most ideal temperature for me to concentrate is bit chilly but not cold with fresh air. In summary, thr perfect place for me to focus needs to be widely open, not too quiet and well fit in temperature.

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  1. Hello young eun,
    I also think that the wider, the better. Narrow space or table will be very uncomfortable. I can't concentrate if there is any noise, but on second thought, a bit of noise sometimes helped me. When I thought about my ideal place, I never thought about the temperature, but only the image. The temperature is one of the most important thing when concentrating.
    Have a nice day,
    seonwoo

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  2. Hi Young Eun.
    It is pretty interesting to read about your place. I agree with widely open place very much, but I prefer to be very quite place. Actually, I better try to do something with music such as jazz. Also you might be very sensitive person because you really care about temperature. You did very good job on capitalize, but you didn't use compound sentence, and you have a spelling mistake on last sentence. I'm glad to read your writing and have a nice day.
    Bora Seo.

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  3. Hi!!!!!!!!
    I'm Sanghyun. I'm hospitatlity and tourism management student. When I read your writing , I agree with you. I don't like quiet place too. I want to study with you if you want.
    Have a last Chuseok day! Bye.

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  4. Hi Youngeun,
    I also like the space that can hear little noise. It helps me to concentrate my work. And, I think you are so detailed. I could never think about the temperature. As I reading your essay, It also seems like one of the important factors to focus on our work. If temperature is too high, I could not study well.
    Thank you for your idea,
    Soyoung

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