I have received several comments from many different Gary's class students, and from that, I learned some useful things in writing. The most useful thing about getting comments is that I can notice my error and fix it so that I can write much better paragraph. Also, not only the grammar errors, they give me advice how to write more plentiful writing. This makes me to think more deeply about how I can add more details. Students who wrote comments on my blog were so kind and taught me with details, it helped me to get willing to learn and improve my writing skills. In brief, comments on my blog from other students gave me good influence in writing.
2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?
Commenting other student's blog is very thoughtful thing to do. From that, I have learned many things. As I write comments on other's blog, I try to be very helpful for their writing. This makes me to think more deeply in grammar, and remind me with proper grammar which I can check whether it's correct. When I keep doing it, I feel like I learn even more by that. Also, by reading other's writing to write a comment, I can learn many writing skills and I use them to write better writing later on which is very useful. Therefore, writing comments on other blogs helps me to learn more in grammar and makes my writing more plentiful.
Hello YoungEun,
답글삭제I really agree with your opinion. Especially I think writing comments taught many grammar skills. I f I see someone’s good grammar skills, I accept this in another way, and I try to apply this in my next paragraph. I am sure you feel the same way, and I also think your paragraph has clear opinion.
Have a nice day,
Jaekyoung
Hi YoungEun,
답글삭제I also thought that comments were helpful in many ways. Especially, comments from other students taught me to find my errors that I didn't know, and led me to fix it. As you said, I agree that receiving and writing comments both are helpful.
Keep writing your fruitful paragraphs~
Thank you,
Jaewon Lee
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답글삭제Hi Young-Eun,
답글삭제Your thinking and my thinking is very similar!! When I comments on someone’s blog, I can find many things. These things that grammatical error, some hint that is useful to my paragraph, and the manner of developing the paragraph are very helpful in any reasons. For example, grammatical error that some use wrong is common error which can anyone do it, then I should let this be a good lesson to myself. Useful skills that someone uses their paragraph are useful to me, so this means using that skills to my paragraph makes my paragraph plentiful. At first comment working is boring and troublesome homework. Now this is best partner to my writing skill!
Thanks,
Duki
Hi Young Eun,
답글삭제I read your writing, and I'm almost touched by your attitude on taking other students correction comments. You are a really excellent learner since you always try to absorb tactics out of others' writings. There is one thing that I want to correct in your paragraphs. Please look at the first line of the first paragraph. You wrote, "and from that," at the very back of the line. However, 'that' indicates 'several comments'. 'Several comments' is plural, so you should write "and from those" instead of 'that'. I hope my correction could give you an informative impact.
Thanks,
Ji Hwan