Production and Ownership of Knowledge
By
attending English Writing2 in this semester, I have earned a lot of knowledge
and got aware of knowledge ownership. In the class, we posted several paragraphs
on our own blogs and comments to other student’s postings. In this process, I was
able to increase the ability of writing and how to feedback each other to
become better. Also, not only the posting, other assignments such as class
review or in-class projects that we did in a group, these also helped me in
producing the knowledge. When I was preparing class review, I had to think how
I can make other students understand properly and give them as much information
as I can. This made me improve the ability of conveying the knowledge to
others and I bet that this was one thing
that Professor Gary wanted to teach us. In addition, in-class projects helped
us to produce knowledge. In-class projects were about sources, a/an/the, titles
and more. These are very important in writing so as we think about this more
deeply and by comparing it with other student, we were able to get feedback and
earn other’s writing skills. In class, Professor Gary especially emphasized the
importance of citation and this is related to the knowledge ownership. As we
post our writing on the blog, we usually bring outside sources to make our
writing more reliable. Bringing outside sources gives me more knowledge and it
reminds me the owner of the information so that I get to understand the concept
of using citation. In brief, as I went through the semester, the experiences
that I had in this class eventually affected me in producing the knowledge and in
learning the concept of knowledge ownership which led my wrting to become in a high
quality.
Hi Young Eun,
답글삭제I’m very glad to read your writing! While I read yours I agreed on most of the points you mentioned, and I learned so many things about writing through this EW2 class too. Frankly speaking, at first I regarded using blog as just annoying and inefficient, but now I realize how effective and efficient it is for our writing skills. By the way, I found some grammar errors on your paragraphs. You should take out ‘to’ from "made me to improve" on the 9th line since the verb is causative verb. Also, "one the thing" is better to be changed to “one thing” or “the thing” with only one single article. Lastly, "and learn~" part of the last sentence needs a subject like "I learned". Except that, I really enjoyed reading yours. :)
Thanks,
Jiwon Moon
Hi Young eun,
답글삭제I was surprised that you learned tremendous things from this class. I just remember the key point Gary emphasized, like citation and outside sources, but it seems like you remember all those things. I would say you keep going with that attitude. Those information will help you a lot one day! Thanks for your writing.
Thanks,
Jaewon Lee
Hi Young Eun,
답글삭제I agree with your writing. This class influenced me in many ways. I think you're gonna be same. In the early part of the class, English Writing was very difficult, but I like English Writing now.
Have a good day,
WooRi